Welcome message

Hello everyone,
As your recruitment officer I have organized a welcome message to new members. I hope to be able to friend most of you to help make it easier for me to know who it new and who isn't. Here is the message. If you have any ideas of how to make it better please any feedback would be helpful.
Dear ______________,
Welcome to the Irish Freedom Party!!!!! Let me be the first to let you know that you made a great decision by joining IFP. This party stands for eIrish freedom and the prosperity of the nation as a whole. By being a part of this party you are given the opportunity to take part in how this nation is run. You can go to our forums, https://irishfreedomparty.forumotion.net/forum.htm, where you can let your voice be heard and where you can learn about the fine points of the game. In the forum you have the chance to interact with some of our very experienced players.

If you are curious about what are party is about you can go to our wiki page and learn more about it. http://wiki.erepublik.com/index.php/Party_Irish_Freedom_Party

Once again welcome to IFP! If you have any question please feel free to message your party president or any of our IFP congressmen.

Lord Atvar

Great Work

Have you used this message and has it worked?

I have an updated version out if thats ok?